revisiting the Museum Posters

I had some useful feedback from my Tutor about the over-cluttered nature of some of my images... so I've been having another look at the Museum Posters and trying to distill the two that I did as collages.

I think that this is a lot clearer and simpler. It has more focus like this. I would probably redo it slightly but I am happy with this as a visual.

I like the teenage idea. It comes across more strongly simplified I think.

I then had a go at simplifying the Children's war right down using the idea of a chalk board. 

I have learnt a lot from going back and having another go at this, but I'm still glad I went through the whole process, I learnt a lot about how to use the computer and manipulate images - all part of the learning process!